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:star: :star: Its always an awesome surprise to wake up to a jam packed message box! I cant believe i got a DD on this! Thanks ~zeivin and ^savagebinn!
Now i just wish i had spent more time on it!! Gah!!
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Well, im happy to finish this, but im not sure if im completely happy with the final results.
I've mentioned that i had been working on a picture of Jasper and Fig, and here it is!!!

Jasper sometimes looses his focus when they're on a job (they're thieves/con artists) and he'll go off into some far away state of mind until Fig, who's pretty one track minded, snaps him out of it.

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Some info on the making of the picture, for those who are interested:

I worked on it for a good three days on and off, probably 15+ hours, even though it really shouldnt have taken so long. I did a lot of time consuming staring and tweaking little things, and a LOT of layering colors on top of more colors.

I wanted to try something a little bit more realistic
I ran into a lot of problems along the way, the biggest, i would say, is that i didnt plan the background out at all. I didnt really give it a second thought until i had already gone ahead and painted Jasper and Fig completely, so i ended up getting stumped with the background and unfortunately did a default bullshit blurry one to compensate.

I also didnt refine the sketch as much as i should have before i started adding color, cause i ended up having to do Fig's left hand over like 3 times, and its still not quite right.

Both dogs were originally much more warm, i ended up screwing with the color balance a lot at the end, which is something i definitely need to do more. Heres an image of what it originally looked like without the background and filters and such. [link]

Soo yeah, hopefully DA doesnt screw with the colors like it seems to be doing lately!


~ As far as critiques go, i'd love to know tips on how to make lighting look realistic, or where it might be a good place to blur something over the other, or other coloring tips on how to make things more realistic? Or how to do good backgrounds. I hate doing backgrounds, though im sure it really just depends on how much time you put into them. That one was a veerry rushed job. lol

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Given 2009-08-18

Stay Focused, Idiot by *colonel-strawberry The suggester writes: "It not only has a great sense of color and atmosphere, as well as a level of detail, but the characters show so much, well, character! I love their expressions so much." (Suggested by ~zeivin and Featured by ^savagebinn)

Critiques


:iconkitsukitty:
That's just so amazing. It really caught my eye. To me, it looked like a part of a movie or something. I love those expressions, too. And it's oh-so-cute! ANd also, it really looked like a painting. To think that this is digital... o_0 It... it's really crazy! XD Well, I must say that I'll be looking up to you and your art work, *colonel-strawberry! I really hope to be as good as you someday!

And yes, those expressions..! Truly beautiful. I don't know, I guess you're just yoo good with the facial expressions, because whenever I draw facial expressions... It's just not this good. I think that the fact that the two are mangy mutts, it makes the faces look amazing. Good choice, technique.. and facial expressions!
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This is a really wonderful piece, for many reasons, and with few improvements to be made.

The detailing in the characters is clearly very attentive work, and does look quite realistic. The design of the characters is excellent, as their features are a perfect balance of humanoid and animal; their clothing is very realistic, and interacts properly with the characters - it sits properly on them, and digs in where it needs to (like the collar, for example).

The background does seem like a bit of a cop out, but I only really noticed it because your description drew attention to it. The simplest way to do a background is just what you did - oick a vague sort of wall and make it blurry. But it isn't so terribly difficult to pick a slightly more interesting setting, like a library, or a billiard room, and paint that. It isn't necessary to lay out an entire room in detail and show perspective and depth - a single wall is fine - but it helps to know exactly where they are, even if it is as an afterthought.

As for realism, many would say you've achieved a perfectly acceptable level of it. However, here are some ways of increasing that realism;
Firstly, watch your edges. Every edge of dog fur needs to look like dog fur, with individual strands sticking out. In fact, you could show more individual strands in general on your characters.
Also, in some places it almost looks like there are traces of lineart - around Fig's nose, for example. This makes her look flat, and detracts from the realism in other parts of the picture.
Your lighting is pretty good with Jasper, as it lights up individual hairs, and all the lighting seems to be coming from the same place. Unfortunately, his ears do not seem to be lit quite as well as the rest of him. Equally unfortunately, Fig doesn't seem to have quite the same attentive lighting. This is one case where it helps to have a good idea of where they are, so you can choose a good, solid light source, and maybe even a secondary light source, for interest.
And finally, the eyes. One of the first and foremost sources of realism for a character is in the eyes. They need a little more depth and detail (lines in the iris, maybe just a touch more shadow for definition), and definitely that little shine that shows the whole eye is an orb, and not just the iris.

I still believe that this is a great picture, and your style is very clear. Good luck in your future endeavors - I'm sure they will be fantastic!
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THIS IS AMAZING, DUDE. Seriously, you've outdone yourself with this one! Absolutely gorgeous work with Fig's hair. (I just love her name) The expressions and the dress are just love <3 and I also really like how you did the fur and eyes~ Amazing work :heart:

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I don't remember which one, but this reminds me of a movie or something.

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Look real, nice expressions! :D

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Oh man, these have always been my favorite characters of yours, and this is a wonderful piece. I actually like the blurred background; it makes the characters pop more! Really nice details, though, I love everything. :heart:
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This is ridiculously good!!! :D

Keep up the good work!!!
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HAHA! AWESOME!

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That fur texture is beautiful and the expressions are perfect!

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